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No Smoking page 2 by *swenyar:iconswenyar:

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Submitted: July 12, 2007
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Warning: Yaoi
Here page 2 from my new comic No Smoking. Stage is set act one is about to begin.
No Smoking is about a cigarette executive named Cam Winsten whose family has been in the tobacco business since the 1700’s. The young executive does not think twice about the effects cigarettes have on peoples health not until he meets a young doctor named Cy Maxwell who lost his mother to lung cancer. Because of the death of his mother the young doctor becomes a leading researcher for a cure for cancer. He has written a book on the affects on smoking and its link to cancer. The young doctor joins to fanatical no smoking group and through this group he meets the young cigarette executive and the sparks start flying.

Please note this is a Yaoi.
Flash/ paint shop pro 7


Here is a link to previous pages of No Smoking [link]
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~deboahan:icondeboahan: Jul 12, 2007, 11:55:49 PM
Well... no Yaoi action yet, so I'm still ok. XD It's nice to read comics that have casual conversationsfrom time to time. :D Just one note, the panelling just kinda confuses me. I don't know which sequnce to follow, the panels? Or the speech? but well... that's just me. ^^;

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~YoakeMae:iconYoakeMae: Jul 13, 2007, 6:25:35 AM
The car doesn't look bad at all, The page itself is looking good too

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~YunikoYokai-Keitorin:iconYunikoYokai-Keitorin: Jul 13, 2007, 8:53:52 AM
oooo, this is getting interesting! ^.^

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Mood: Affection *swenyar:iconswenyar: Jul 13, 2007, 10:59:18 AM
I my gosh!!! :omfg: That is exactly what my brother said all most word to word. Fred also said the bubble in the center is floating between panels makes it confusing. I could not find room in the panel with out covering up the drawing. That was bad planning on my part. ^_^ If these things are not pointed out to me then I don’t learn. Some times I am just get to close to my work I need to learn how to step back a bit. Thank you so much :hug:

This is just a light Yaoi nothing heavy. ^_^

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Mood: Affection *swenyar:iconswenyar: Jul 13, 2007, 11:01:35 AM
Thank you very much!!! :hug:

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Mood: Affection *swenyar:iconswenyar: Jul 13, 2007, 11:02:11 AM
Thank you !!! :hug:

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~deboahan:icondeboahan: Jul 15, 2007, 9:07:00 PM
lolz, no problem. Glad I could help a little. ^^

Well anyway, balloons between the panels are ok. They kinda look kewl in my opinion. :D I guess it's just the size of the panels and how they are positioned. Can't help you much bout that though. I'm more into the boring, easy to follow, grid-type panelling, so I don't think I have the right to give you panelling tips. ^^;

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*swenyar:iconswenyar: Jul 17, 2007, 5:30:23 PM
I like easy to read grid like paneling I should do some of those. ^_^
:hug: You have a great eye for design and I appreciate your opinion very much. ^_^

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~deboahan:icondeboahan: Jul 17, 2007, 7:33:04 PM
Ahaha that's really flattering. Thank you too. ^__^
Well, good luck to us! :w00t:

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